Reader knows best! Suzan Lauder’s new blog series “Learning from my Mistakes”

Suzan Lauder, Exhibit #158 at the Jane Austen Festival of Port Alberni, July 2016

Suzan Lauder, Exhibit #158 at the Jane Austen Festival of Port Alberni, July 2016

A couple of months ago, I thought about all I was learning while editing my latest novel and decided I’d write a few blog posts on the topic to help others learn from my experience. I thought I’d start writing posts straight away, but editing my novel, and my husband’s last minute decision to retire early, and editing, and summer, and editing, and working with the cover artist, and editing, and a Jane Austen Festival, and editing, and my niece’s visit, and editing all stepped in.

I haven’t had a haircut in more than three months, and the end-of-season sales are over and I still haven’t found that elusive perfect pair of low-heeled dressy wedge sandals with no toe post but a full ankle strap for next winter in Mexico. Fussy, right? You would be too if you’d turned your ankle one too many times on steep driveways across the sidewalk.

But the introductory post is now written and in your sweaty little palms. Or so it would be if this were 1979. More on that later.

Now we begin our journey together. We’re here to giggle over this author’s mistakes. Each post will have a few examples of my own revelations as lessons to all writers, perhaps to give you a boost rather than let you learn the hard way. The end result isn’t about my opinions any more than the opinions of writing experts, editors, publishers, or any person other than the reader.

parasol resized for bullet pointsSuzan Lauder’s “Learning from my Mistakes” Lesson #1: As an author, your goal is to provide a reading experience with the greatest level of satisfaction that is within your control.

Some of what I’ve learned as a writer in the last few years is different than in classic novels or “What We Learned in School” (as if the capitals in our voice somehow make it Gospel). Some say these techniques are trends, buzz phrases, “flavour of the month.” Yet, if techniques you think are buzz phrases are guaranteed to give the reader greater satisfaction, what’s stopping you from incorporating them into your story?

Hmmm? What’s that? I can’t hear you.

“The way I do it is was good enough for Hemingway.”

Are you Hemingway? If Hemingway knew ways to make the reader enjoy his novels more, would he have said the way he does it is “good enough?” Perhaps. But he had a gift that 99% of writers do not, so we have to fill the gap by utilizing every tool available to us.

An interesting story Miss Ray, by William Wood, 1806, Met Museum.

An interesting story Miss Ray, by William Wood, 1806, Met Museum. Public domain.

I struggle to be a good writer where others find it easier. Ease is not a good reason to sit back on your laurels over and over again. You may get a toned butt and quadriceps, but that’s about it. Yeah, I suck at idioms.

Perhaps as an author, you can sell loads of books that are merely “good enough,” but as a reader, don’t you prefer that extra little something? It’s sort of like warming the speculum, chilling the beer mug, smiling at the end of the transaction.

Good writing practice is never “flavour of the month.” If you’re arguing against good writing practice, either you don’t understand the specific application or you’re making excuses to dig in your heels in a world that’s already made the big change. Despite my use of a goofy idiom, it’s no longer 1979, but if you want to stick with the way you’ve always done it, have fun with your typewriter.

Instead, I hope my blog followers enjoy how I describe newer writing concepts to make them easier to understand, and that other authors may be inspired and brave enough to give them a try.

I don’t expect to change the world, just entertain you for a few minutes. Please, have a few laughs at my expense as I bare all my “problems” as a writer!

Disclaimer: I’m not a writing expert. I’m just a writer who learned some stuff other writers might like to know instead of learning the hard way. My approach is pragmatic, and my posts are not professionally edited!

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2 thoughts on “Reader knows best! Suzan Lauder’s new blog series “Learning from my Mistakes”

  1. Tricia, you are too kind! Your words are at least as good as the best of book reviews! I encourage you consider copying them to the Alias Thomas Bennet page for the bookseller of your choice, as it’s an opportunity to tell potential readers what they can expect and help them with their purchase decision. Your modest honesty makes it a valuable statement.

    I’m re-reading Alias Thomas Bennet right now. For the first time, I’m reading it as a reader and not as a writer or an editor. I noticed small opportunities for improvement, but it doesn’t lessen my pride in it–my first novel!–one jot. The next novel, Letter From Ramsgate, is quite different from Alias Thomas Bennet, though easily as enjoyable (in my biased opinion). It will be released in October. Thanks so much for your support!

  2. I love this blog and I really don’t know where you find the time and special place to write so well and yes, so entertainingly. I have just sadly finished “Alias Thomas Bennet” and I am so depressed that the reading experience is over. I thoroughly enjoyed every single sentence. I am not a page turner as a rule, as curling up with a good book is not an opportunity that I can usually afford time-wise. With this book of yours I found myself making the most creative excuses to hide away and lose myself in your creation. I certainly cannot write a book review nor am I in the least qualified to do so but the answer to all the following was a resounding YES!
    Was I entertained on each and every page? Was I impressed with the Austenesque prose? Was the story an embellishment of the original and did it offer further and true understanding of each and everyone of the characters? You did Jane proud. Well done. Can’t wait for the next one.

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